1. Some people say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?
In today’s world due to the advancement of technology new inventions are coming into existence. It is a certainty that “necessity is a mother invention”. (The) Internet is just like a wonder box, which contains every type of information. Besides it has also proved as a very important tool to connect people with each other.
In today’s modernized era nobody has sufficient time to write letters to their loved ones. Moreover it also takes longer to send or receive any information. But through an internet it is an easiest way to send messages to our loved ones. Either it can be in the form of an e-mail or text messages from internet to cell phones. We can send and receive messages straight way.
In other hand today’s youth generation mostly prefer to do chatting on internet. Through this chatting we can write messages and straight way can get their reply. Moreover voice chatting is going to be very popular day-by-day.
As it is reality that advantages and disadvantages are like both side of a coin, which usually runs parallel. So like other things internet also has some downsides, like people are facing some health problems for example, poor eye-sight, back ache, migraine. Today’s teenagers usually prefer to spend their time on internet rather than to participating in other physical activities, so that’s why? They are going to be weaker in their physical health.
To conclude, I would like to say that internet is one of the most modernized and most successful tools, not only for communication, even to get most relevant information regarding every field in a very short period of time.
Comments:
-in today’s world, due to the advancement of technology
-THE internet (it is a proper noun)
-in today’s world, due to the advancement of technology
-THE internet (it is a proper noun)
2. With all the troubles in the world today, money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be spent on other things.
Nations after nations, everyday, every year, celebrate their achievements in space exploration. However, it is now time to question how meaningful these blasts are. This essay aims to explain why it is questionable.
First, until all urgent and important matter in this globe have been solved, money bumped on space exploration is of no meaning. It is not a common sense at all to invest million dollars researching and producing foods for astronauts (for space exploration purpose), while everyday, thousands of people are starving.
Furthermore, the discovery of outer space only serves a minor group of people if the majority are even not well-educated. Those in rural areas or third-world nations don’t even know how to prevent common threatening diseases like AIDS and lung cancer.
Then, some may argue that the purpose of space exploration are to discover new lands, new energy resources or to deter potential threat to globe. Nevertheless, is it effective to do so while other alternatives are available? Lands on earth are no yet effectively used. New energy resources (e.g. solar and nuclear energy) have not yet been widely-used threats of plague have not yet been deterred. All these “not-yets” need money. That is why costly space discovery programs are a waste of money.
In the nutshell, people should only invest in space exploration providing that early-mentioned urgent and important matters have been solved. Also, purposes of space exploration campaign should be studied carefully and other alternatives should be considered before money is wasted.
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*nation after nation-----NOT "NATIONS AFTER NATIONS"
*REPHRASE YOU SENTENCE---HOWEVER IT IS NOW TIME TO QUESTION HOW MEANINGFUL THESE BLASTS ARE to " and whether there maybe more beneficial ways to use the money
* THIS ESSAY AIMS TO EXPLAIN....-----(This is not necessary)
*spent ---NOT "BUMPED"
*is of no meaning (be careful because this is your opinion not a fact.)
*not common sense --NOT "IT IS NOT A COMMON SENSE"
*only serves a minor group of people (again be careful this is only your opinion. Many believe that it benefits all people)
* your sentence THOSE IN RURAL AREAS OR THIRD-WORLD NATIONS DO NOT EVEN KNOW HOW TO PREVENT COMMON THREATENING DISEASES LIKE AIDS AND LUNG CANCER-------people living in the rural areas of many countries would be offended by this e.g. Australia, USA etc..
* the globe (earth) not "POTENTIAL THREAT TO GLOBE"
YOU HAVE SO MANY CONFUSION WITH YOUR EXPRESSIONS AND VOCABULARIES.
3. In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules?
Freedom plays a mandatory role in everybody's life. We can see in today's modernized era.
